Play-doh planets

This is my play-doh solar system.

A trip around planet earth

On Earth there are many landforms. There are many different types of landforms including mountains, lakes, volcanoes, islands, plateaus and even peninsulas. mountains are tall rocky structures that usually have snow at the top and if there are many of them together it is called a mountain range.Mountains can be many sizes and can also be mistaken as volcanoes.Volcanoes are tall like mountains but can erupt causing ash and lava to fly everywhere this is what the inside of a volcano:

Volcanoes can explode to leave a huge hole that can make a lake for example lake taupo:

Lakes are Big or medium bodies of water that can contain fish, fresh water crayfish and seaweed.Lakes can be in various shapes and sizes.They can be shallow or deep and not all of them contain life also they can be hazardous.Islands are bodies of land surrounded by water.They can be big they can be small they can be round they can be oval they can be sand they can be dirt they can have trees the can have animals.Islands can contain people some can’t .

Plateaus are mountains with a flat tops . they are usually in deserts.and can be very hard to get to.A peninsula is a piece of land that just sticks off from the mainland.It can also be many shapes and sizes.

Recrafting TTS (recount / description

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“Whats going on” I said under my breath, Have Mr Robertson and Mrs Gordon started the block classroom already? . I stepped through the door and saw old desk’s with names on them, I looked around trying to find my desk but before I could Mr R called my name, I looked up and saw him pointing at a desk in the front row . I sat down and we started the roll .

We sang the national anthem . I liked the learning at first but then we had to do shakespeare  .I could hardly see the the words and I only understood like ten of them .After we did handwriting and we did dictionary skills .

At morning tea we got out our lunch boxes and sat at our desks . We waited for Mr R’s call to bite, once we did we waited for him to say bite again . After we did marching, by then I had lost all my self respect .

After morning tea we were told that we won’t be doing that every day . Later we did a pmi chart and a chalk talk .

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“Whats going on” I said under my breath, Have Mr Robertson and Mrs Gordon started the block classroom already? . I stepped through the door and saw old desk’s with names on them, I looked around trying to find my desk but before I could Mr R called my name, I looked up and saw him pointing at a desk in the front row . I sat down and we started the roll .

We sang the national anthem . I liked the learning at first but then we had to do shakespeare Dun, Dun, Dun  .I could hardly see the the words and I only understood like ten of them .After we did handwriting and we did dictionary skills .

At morning tea we got out our lunch boxes and sat at our desks . We waited for Mr R’s call to bite, once we did we waited for him to say bite again . After we did marching, by then I had lost all my self respect .

After morning tea we were told that we won’t be doing that every day . Later we did a pmi chart and a chalk talk .

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“Whats going on” I said under my breath Have Mr Robertson and Mrs Gordon started the block classroom already? . I walked through the door and saw old tables with names on them, I looked around trying  to find my desk but before I could find it Mr R called my name I looked up and saw him pointing at it . I sat down and we started the roll .

We sang the national anthem . I liked it at first but then we had to do shakespeare  . Then we did handwriting,we also did dictionary skills . I could hardly see the the words and I only understood like ten of them .

At morning tea we got out our lunch boxes and sat at our desks . We waited for Mr R’s call to bite once we did we waited for him to say bite again . Then we did marching by then I had lost all my self respect .

After morning tea we were told that it won’t be doing that every day . Then we did a pmi chart and a chalk talk .

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“Whats going on” I said under my breath Have Mr Robertson and Mrs Gordon started the block classroom already? . I walked through the door and saw old tables with names on them, I looked around trying  to find my desk but before I could find it Mr R called my name I looked up and saw him pointing at it . I sat down and we started the roll .

We sang the national anthem . I liked it at first but then we had to do shakespeare  . Then we did handwriting,we also did dictionary skills . I could hardly see the the words and I only understood like ten of them .

At morning tea we got out our lunch boxes and sat at our desks . We waited for Mr R’s call to bite once we did we waited for him to say bite again . Then we did marching by then I had lost all my self respect .

After morning tea we were told that it won’t be doing that every day . Then we did a pmi chart and a chalk talk .

Octoshark vs the squidwhale

Dave swam as fast as he could to try and get to the bottom. he found air pockets on the way down .He swam for about 5 minutes until he started to see a faint golden glow .As he swam closer he saw a giant golden octoshark .As soon as he did he swam up into a cave he saw earlier and to his surprise it was filled with underwater spy gear and air tanks. Dave picked up all he could and shot off toward it . He used eight harpoons to try and inger it all it did was blind it in one eye from that moment Dave knew this was going to be hard. He swam back and found a light saber brought it out and “Sssss” it went out by the water. he swam back and forth trying to find a good weapon until he found the trident it was the only thing that could defeat the octoshark but only the prince of the squidwhale could use it. luckily he was.”zap” he used the power of the trident to zap a cage of magic over the octoshark and from that day on he was the king of the octoshark and the squidwhale.

THE END