Monday, 7 September 2015

Rock-Hard thank you letter

Dear Mrs Bergeson

Thank you for devoting your time to help Rock-Hard with making our concrete pots. We really appreciated it and we couldn’t of done it without your help.

Hello I’m an employee of rock hard and I would like you to thank you for coming down on sunday and devoting your time to help us make our concrete pots. Like I already said we couldn’t of done it without your help. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us it was greatly appreciated.Our pots turned out great except some pots have jars in them and we can’t get get the jars out without breaking them. We also have made heaps more pots and this time we used morta instead of concrete. Once there painted they will be great.

Yours sincerely Ben Richards
Rock-Hard








Re-crafted version
Dear Mrs Bergeson

Thank you for devoting your time to help Rock-Hard with making our concrete pots. We really appreciated it and we could not have done it without your help.

Hello I’m an employee of rock hard and I would like you to thank you for coming down on sunday and devoting your time to help us make our concrete pots. Like I already said we could not have done it without your help. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us it was greatly appreciated.

Our pots turned out great except some pots had glass jars in them and we can’t get get the jars out without breaking them. We also have made lots more pots and this time we used morta instead of concrete.

Once their painted they will be great.

Yours sincerely Ben Richards
Rock-Hard

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